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It was Saturday night and you were at your couch, bored out of your mind. Normally your mom will nag you to get off your lazy but and have fun.

Its not your fault that your "fun" means staring at the TV...


You groaned as you picked up the phone. Who would be disturbing your loving stares at the television?! But in your mind, you thanked the heavens.

"Hey frau! The awesome me is calling!" the caller, Gilbert said.

"No, it's Germany drunk and pretended to be Gil..." You rolled your eyes. 

"Well someone's feisty there! Kesesese" He laughed.

"What do you need Gil?" you said getting a soda from the fridge. 
Although you didnt get out too much, there was this party you went, when you met Gil and his friends Francis and Antonio. They annoyed you constantly but you loved them anyways.

"Hola chica!" A spanish accent was on the phone. "Were in front of your house, can you open the door?" he asked.

"WHAT!" you shouted. When did they get here? 
You got a jacket from your room and changed your hello kitty bottoms (given by Yao) to faded jean shorts and your purple tank top with a cut off Superman T-shirt  (given by the hero himself, Alfred) 

The door pounded and you saw Gil pressing the doorbell and pounding the door.

"I'm here! I'm here!" You shouted clearly frustrated.  You opened the door. You saw Gil leaning sideways against the door, Francis and Antonio behind.

"Took you long, Frau" Gil smirked.
"The awesome me was getting bored" 
He added. 

"Mi Tomato!" Antonio glomped you and kissed your cheeks. You blushed. 

"Guess that's why he calls me that." You thought, lightly hugging him.

"ohohohohon, Bella! Nice to see you again! France said as he kissed my  hand. 

"That's the only thing he'll get from me." you thought, takinh your hand away from him. 

"Since you all are here, Might as well
Go out right?" You said leaving your house and locking it. 

"You know us too well bella!" France chuckled. 

--------time skip bunny!---------

All of us ended up in the bar. The three of them were drinking and a little drunk. You can tell, Spain was glaring at the glass, Gilbert was laughing nonstop and singing "I'm sexy and I know it" and Francis? Francis was making out with the going in Facebook. 

You were the designated driver and was just sipping on drinks and all. You asked the waitress for a bowl of cherries since You have nothing to do. She gave me the bowl and you started eating the red balls. Then You popped the stem in your toungue and tried knotting it. 
The trio was looking at me weirdly. 

"Madmoiselle? Are you trying to choke yourself?" Francis asked you.

"Hey frau? What the hell are you doing?" Prussia looked at you. 

"Yeah bella (y/n), are you okay?" Antonio said putting a hand on my shoulder. 

You  laughed at them. "Seriously? Don't you know this little game?" You giggled at them.

They still looked at me like they saw Canada speak. 

"Well they say that when you can knot a cherry's stem, you're a good kisser." You explained, getting the stem out of your mouth and let them see a perfect knot. 

Their eyes were amazed. "Who knew (y/n) was such a good kisser?" That was the thought that ran through their heads. 

Then an idea popped into the "awesome's" head. 

"Frau." Gil snaked his arms around (y/n) waist.

"What do you want?" You said clearly sensing what was happening.

"If your such a good kisser, then why don't you kiss me to see if this game is real. Kesesese" Gil smirked going near you. 

You smirked. "Sure, Gil. I'll kiss you." you moved a little  closer.  Toni and Francis were shocked, they didnt know you would accept. 

The most shocked was Gil himself. He never expected you to give in. But he wouldnt let his guard down. Besides kissing (y/n) would be awesome too. 

He smirked and placed his lips on (y/n). You were about to pull back but Gil's hand was on your head, as the kiss was getting deeper. 

"WTF! It was just supposed to be a peck on the lips! That was the joke!" You thought. He licked your bottom lip and you gasp as he shoved his toungue in your mouth. Despite your protest, it still felt nice and your heart was beating faster. You fought for dominance. You found his tickle spot and touched it making him open his mouth. You smirked and gave everything to that kiss. This is a kissing contest right? A few seconds later you both pulled back for air. 

"Hm your good frau, but i'm more awesome!" Gil laughed. 

You rolled your eyes but slightly blushed at the statement. 

"Mi Tomato! I'm next!!! "

"Bella, what about me? Ohohohohon!"




Cue facepalm.
HI! another story! this is for :iconakatsuki-leader2012:
hope you like it.

yes reader ends up with Prussia!

hope you enjoyed!
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AnimeGeekKatie Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
First time I tried I was able to, and the rest of my friend were like: 0-0 
PeaceLuvLife Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Student General Artist
I actually can knot a cherry stem…it's kinda funny really…umm…BTT!
DJwolfdragon3 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Haha! I actually can tie a cherry stem into a knot! Good and Bad for me XD :cherry: Life is not a bowl of cherries Free Avatar: Cherry 
Mew-Blueberry12 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
when they asked to me me :

PrussiasKitten Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
tried tying knot.... chokes.... that is what the real outcome would be. True story. lol. good story you got there.
HetaliaLover696969 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013
THESE FLIPPIN' DERPS OUTTA KNOW I AIN'T NO KISSIN' BOOTH! :iconprussiaderpplz: :iconspainderpplz: :iconfrancederpplz:
AshleynWoods Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
sherbetkitty Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
Prussia's face.... dude...
HetaliaLover696969 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014
Awesome, isn't it?
sherbetkitty Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
I had nightmares about it...
HetaliaLover696969 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
;n; Well okay then
Koi-Fish9 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
hedgehogs11 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no, bella is italian jadech! bella=beautiful, dont worry though, I mix those up too! but anyways... I thought it was so funny!
jadech Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
but i don't laugh or act like france, i am no pervert, i promise!!!!!!!Rainbow Cute Cry PlzSmiley BambooD'Choo 08 kitty 
jadech Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ya, it's for both or something like that, all i know for sure is that it's not french, i should know cause i am"Bonjour" 
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
Loved that ending XD
Arstraea1 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
France & Spain: Me next !!!
I: :iconfuckyeahamericaplz:
SorryImOnHiatus Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My thoughts exactly xD
Arstraea1 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
yay :D
SorryImOnHiatus Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
jadech Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
bella isn't french, Belle is, bella is spanish
DreamingHetalia101 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
or italian
jadech Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ya well, you know what i mean

DreamingHetalia101 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
jadech Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

DreamingHetalia101 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
jadech Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
bye!:bounce: :floating: 
DreamingHetalia101 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sonicgfriendKat Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist
spain is the least proverted so i like him :iconyayspainplz:
Hawkkiller1 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
HetaliaRules99 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Spain & France: Me next
me: :icongermanyfacepalmplz:
RoseEmma1 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
Pffft XD
France and Spain: Me next!!
(^∇^) this was great :)
So funny
Aww XD :yayprussiaplz:
Nals-luff Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Doesn't anyone else love BTT cracks? xD
I-am-number-10 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
It's belle in French, bella is Spanish, kinda confusing but anyways that was great!
MiruzukiChan Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love your work!!

Google Translate if you cannot understand:

Eh, dude. Ang Ganda ng Gawa mo~~~ Ay, diyos ko po!! Salamat na nasa akin na ang mahal ko~~ :icontearsofjoyplz: THANK YOU SO MUCH.

DeliciousxSouls Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
*looks down*
I'm wearing Hello Kitty pants right now! WOOT
AliceLiddell123 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
*loves it~* anyone care for another~?
qweruiopqweruiop Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
ImmaNinjaPplz Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
L1LxFR3AK Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wait 4 it...wait 4 it FACEPALM *facepalms*
DeathnoteChickx Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012
Myself and my cousins did the cherry thing at a sleepover and we could actually do it XD.

Now if there was only a real bad touch trio then that would be so awesome haha

Epic story dude :D
samikira Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist
i don't know whats worse having two smexy guys and a creepy french in front of my door step or france wanting to kiss me
Dravenkirkland Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012
"This is so going on Facebook" XDDD :matrixfight:
Phantom-Ripper Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol.... That sound so like me XD........
Ravanacorvin Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
God.....those guys may be hot but they can be really stupid when they want to be.......especially when drunk.
TheArtisticGenius Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Holy cra-- is it weird that I have an unfinished BTT reader that goes a bit like yours does up until that first time skip?!? O.O This is coincidental...if you wanna see what I wrote before I even saw this, I'll note it to you!

And awesome fic btw!! Lol, that'd be awesome to tie knot like that XD
wonderstruck710 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah can you send it to me? thanks :))
TheArtisticGenius Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
When I get it transferred from my Ipod to my computer, I'll note it to you! ^^
IvanFan12 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
Yay Prussia!!!
Dudes, I was bored and me and my BFF were tying cherry stems in knots with our tongues and all the boys in the lunchroom were staring at us now I know why.
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